Talk:Kota Sorrowblade

I had a chance to read over your page and noticed several red flags that may lead your character to being ostracized from the RP community.

The overall style of your character is a little too stereotypical of the brooding character, but I am not about to lecture you on your choice of character design and nor should anyone else. I would steer away from using the name "Lucifer." The direct linkage to the devil is far too obvious a mark for ridicule and I'm sure you don't want that.

The "Explained" portion of your page is fine; not my taste, but again there is no judgement here for design.

Killing the Grim Reaper, now that I can see becoming a hitch in your plan. Warcraft never makes any mention of a Grim Reaper, or Death, though similiar designs in things are used. It's one thing to create a character and it's an entirely 'nother thing to fabricate a quasi-deity such as Death, especially one that exists in our own culture. I would suggest picking another name, at the very least, and at most removing the whole aspect of having a grim reaper and then Kota outright killing him and taking his stuff.

Listing spells at your disposal is a nice touch, but so many look to be taken from warlocks, shadow priests, and anyone with a "dark" theme to their attack. Those that aren't seem far too overpowered for anyone to be using without god-modding a situation. Again, I like the idea but it requires a lot of retooling.